Some people think that cars are the best way to travel in a city, while others think that bicycle is better.
Discuss both points of views and give your opinion.
In this 21st century, vehicles are very common, most of the people have their own automobiles : Car, Bike and so on. Some people believe that, the cars are better to travel in town. Others, however, reckon that, cycle is the best way to travel. I will discuss upon both the views before coming to my opinion.
On one hand, there are some advantages of using cars : it consume less time to reach the destination, to safe from the hotness of sun and many more. Also have some disadvantages, presently, the pollution has become an alarming issue for most of the countries of the world, owing to the frequent utilisation of motor cars, which is the cause of the air pollution from its fumes not only that but also affects the layer of ozon. For an example, one of the nations of the world - Australia, where the largest number of cars are used by citizens due to that the air is polluted and the fumes of automobiles built the holes in ozone layer, owing to that, many mankinds are suffering from the skin cancer.
On the other hand, pedal cycles are less used in cities because it take too much time to reach any where and humans think that cycles are only for childrens. There humongous of benefits of utilising bicycles for all people as well as creatures. For an instance, if individuals ought to start using pedal cycles, it keep the health of people, gain the lives of birds and main advantage is less contamination in a city, also in country, if all citizens start cycling.
In my opinion, it is one of the best way to use bicycles because it assist to stop pollution and incline the expectancy of life of all : humans, birds and animals as well.
In conclusion, the use of motor cars increase the chances of accidents and its vapour harm the environment but the utilisation of cycles have no negative impacts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58895705521 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45469509458 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536809815951 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2108826155 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204139967681 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842569034035 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685589085947 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108160888301 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901117566084 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.