In many countries, several people can earn a lot of money. Some people think that this is best for the country, others assume that governments have not allowed salaries above a specific level.
First of all, people who earn particularly high salaries will pay high taxes to the government. More than 98% of government income comes from the taxes which has been paid by society. These taxes can be used to develop the country's growth in many sectors, such as economic, education, infrastructure, public service, and many more.
In contrast, the government should not all people to earn money above a certain level. However, the government can not make a rule about how much money a person can earn. People who can or can not get much money is depending on their professionalism and where do they work. Although they work in the same industry, the salary which they get will be different. For example, an actor will be paid much more than a cameraman, even though both of them work in the same industry(film).
In conclusion, people who earn particularly high salaries in a country can help the country's growth, at the same time the government can not restrict how much a person can earn.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: aloukik
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...eople who can or can not get much money is depending on their professionalism and where do t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76699029126 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66935563676 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7035267388 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2727272727 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317171954611 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134276694677 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108852234516 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226653426504 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907170897018 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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