In order to stay healthy, many people choose to exercise. Some people tend to exercise individually such as running and riding bicycles, etc. Some people tend to participate in group exercises such as team sports. Which one do you prefer and why?
A physical activities are crucial when we talk about good health and there are many choices among them. I think that group exercises like team sports are better and I will explain why I feel like that in the following paragraphs.
First, when participating in sports with numerous people we can create and keep real social contacts. Meeting many individuals can help you develop your communication skills. Moreover this leads to future interactions out of the particular sport. For instance when I was toddler my dad decided to involve me in the city martial art club. In the fragile age of seven, I practiced karate diligently 3 times per week. In the beginning I didn't like it and I wanted to resign, however after two months I craved to go even more often. The lessons required many of us to practice this amazing martial art together, which led to solid friendships and I am so thankful because I still keep in touch with some of the alumni.
Second being assemble with others when doing physical activities or sports can definitely be avail, due to people's help when necessary. Once we make something wrong, there is always partner to show you where you make wrong and to gives you advice. Each person in certain area has different experience and knowledge, hence we can get proper information and recommendation in order to do our goals. No one can deny that people learn from others when giving effort in physical activities.
In conclusion I would say that is undoubtedly more acceptable when we practice sports in group of people, because we can make robust connections and friendships likewise to get useful advice when we struggle carry out our desire result.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, likewise, moreover, second, so, still, as to, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 287.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86759581882 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66598114674 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.73071355 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7857142857 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159073246932 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507428181409 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426639749148 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892797363485 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387060710251 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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