In order to stay healthy, many people choose to exercise. Some people tend to exercise individually such as running and riding bicycles, etc. Some people tend to participate in group exercises such as team sports. Which one do you prefer and why?
there is no shortage of opinions on which exercise type is better for staying healthy. if we're forced to choose, I would definitely select individual exercise for me. it is my firm belief that this decision will be much more beneficial for a number of reasons and I will develop this idea in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, people who choose individual exercise seem very focused on their health, however, people who go on group exercise found much time for fun and gossip instead of practicing. group exercise always lost their motive that why they are doing this, which causes no result on the health and that is waste our precious time. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. when my big brother was trying to lose weight because he got a new job that time he want to look better in the office. he decides to with his friends gym in a group and exercise there. Unfortunately, after wasting more than three months this did not work because of his friend's lazy mentality. later he buys some gym materials and starts his individual exercise at home. As a result, he got succeed in losing weight in just two months. For this reason, individual exercise is a better opinion if you are serious about your health.
In addition, people who have a very busy schedule are free to exercise any time by taking individual exercise but in group exercise, you must attend the session at a particular time which is not easy for people who have complex schedules. many of group exercises or team sports are always held in the morning, which is a major problem for people who have their office call early in the morning. Drawing from my own experience, when my dad used to go play badminton in OSG academy in the morning, they got into so much trouble while going office after returning from play because they always used to miss their train. consequently, they face many complaints from their seniors. so, they decide to shift their exercise to a night session and start it individually. it is certainly clear that individual exercise does have not any disadvantages and it helps people so much to be healthy.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I strongly believe that it is better to choose to exercise individually and practice individual games to focus on maintaining our health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, look, so, while, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7396593674 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56902047669 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520681265207 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6652875639 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.526315789 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6315789474 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274104754318 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927865814208 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783097591802 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159896185895 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519586335247 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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