The charts below show UK and USA energy consumption in 2000 and 2006.
The two bar charts compare the consumption of some energy resources between UK and USA in the year 200 and 2006. It can be clearly seen that the use of oil, in both nations and years, was the highest.
A glance at the first graph, in 2000, the two main energy resources in USA were oil and coal and similarly in UK although just different in its percentage. USA used oil as much as 36% and coal slightly different by less one percent of its rates. On the other hand, in UK, coal became preferable energy by exact 30% and oil was less 2%. Consuming other energy resources, such as: gas, nuclear powe...
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Dear Sir, I have a question
Dear Sir,
I have a question about Sentence Length SD. As I read from your previous comments to some member that it was really important to achieve the same number as the length SD mentioned above to get the best score. How do I do?
Thanks,
Bocahnakal
"Sentence Length SD is low"
"Sentence Length SD is low" means that the essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. It is boring. So more sentences varieties wanted.
"Sentence Length SD is high" means that the length of sentences changed so often. It is hard to read and breaks the smooth.
If you consider the essay as a tree, the Sentence Length is like those leaves. Too long or too short leaves will do harm to the beauty of the tree.
Thank you sir. It means that
Thank you sir. It means that I ought to practice a lot.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 229 200
No. of Characters: 972 1000
No. of Different Words: 113 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.89 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.245 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.394 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 56 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 39 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.818 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.573 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.545 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.423 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.623 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.089 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4