You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish.
Write a letter to the admissions tutor:
• explain your position
• apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day.
• ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to apologize for not able to attend an interview for the course of Master of Business at your college because I am in dire need for medical treatment of my eyes; thus, I took an urgent appointment with my doctor which is scheduled on the same day as the interview.
Let me explain in detail, as I am suffering from the eye related problems since two months, now doctor suggests me for the operation, he gave me an appointment of Monday i.e, July 25, 2020, and it will take 10 days to recover properly. Could you please allow me to come after August 6, 2020 for the interview so that I can make try to take admission in your reputed college.
I would like to know that is there any subjective or objective test before the personal interview and how much time the whole process will take so that I can make arrangements accordingly.
I look forward for positive response from your end.
Yours Sincerely,
John Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...esponse from your end. Yours Sincerely, John Smith
^^^
Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...your end. Yours Sincerely, John Smith
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49431818182 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53242785829 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.681818181818 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.4203005256 44.8134815571 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.833333333 76.5299724578 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 16.8248392259 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250917139463 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10634859972 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696750063999 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12831646116 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731461334617 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 8.37731958763 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 7.45979381443 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 8.62886597938 307% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.