In the past , Male and female rank different ,wherein female under male level and female has limited latitude . in the universities most of male than female in every subjects but after appearing gender equality , female latitude wider even almost equivalent .Give your views.
It is irrefutable to say that from the past to today’s life, gender equality still exists in various aspects of life. It is claimed by the section of the people that in the past, males have more higher educational degrees as compared to females and now it is reversed and females have explored their selves more than men .I strongly agree with this and I will delve deeply about such type of issue in this essay.
Firstly, in the past, owing to narrow mind thinking or religious matters, it was not allowed to women to get education, right to vote and even they could not show their faces to male community. Therefore, very limited women could get education at basic level and going to universities was like swim across the sea for them , resulted , they get married and handle only the household activities.
Secondly, due to globalization and gender equality, nowadays entries of the women in the higher education institutions is mushrooming .In the past, because of the separate institutions, courses was very limited for the females like home science, nursing, stitching etcetera .However, these days a girl can choose any kind of subject for education, she can do engineering, get education of space, marines and many more. Moreover, equilibrium has raised the job opportunities in each profession for the both gender, resulted ranking of girls are increasing in the universities.
To conclude, receiving of males and females in equal in the universities can grow up the level of research and the productivity. Moreover females can think free and explore more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, still, therefore, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04597701149 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81063959804 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.376382413 49.4020404114 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 164.625 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.625 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258936151925 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115032051614 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821355355121 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165276528973 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876553354804 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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