You should spend about 20 minutes on this task You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college Unfortunately because of a previous appointment you cannot come at the time they wish Write a letter to the admissions t

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I will not be able to attend the interview on coming Friday because I have an appointment for my covid vaccination on the same date.

I was trying to get an appointment for my covid-19 vaccination for the past few days, and yesterday I received my vaccination date that is on coming Friday. The date has clashed with my interview at your university for my master's degree program selection. I understand the importance of both in my life, however, I have to give priority to health first because of the limited doses available in my town. Besides, the government has not decided to order the next consignment of covid-19 doses to my city. As a result, it is necessary for me to visit and get myself vaccinated for the first dose.

Please accept my apology for not attending the interview on the scheduled date. I hope you understand the problems and concerns ongoing with the pandemic situation. So, if there is any chance to reschedule the interview for any other day or date, I assure you that I will be coming on that day. Apart from this, I would like to know the details which will on go at the time of my interview day. Firstly, the time duration of my interview process with the interviewer. And, another information I would like to know if there is an aptitude test or technical test related to my applied specialization of my master's program for the selection process, please update me about the same on an urgent basis. I will be grateful if you will provide me the above-mentioned details, in such case, I will be fully prepared on the interview day.

I am looking forward to hearing a prompt response.

Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin

Votes
Average: 7.5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, apart from, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.85567010309 363% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 937.175257732 151% => OK
No of words: 304.0 206.0 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66447368421 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77783539106 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509868421053 0.622605031667 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 290.88556701 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.4867859499 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5333333333 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205434328008 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739032831037 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068905931082 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142095414938 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11548023492 0.0580467560999 199% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.