People's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factors.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Although shopping has been becoming prevalent, shopping habits seem to be different and various among almost all citizens. I absolutely disagree with the point that the age group is the most influential factor that causes distinguished shopping habits, which, from my perspective, are affected more by financial problems and where a person lives.
Diverse shopping habits are attributed most to individual financial condition. It is clear that affluent people tend to spend money on overpriced and luxurious products when going shopping, while these seem to be unaffordable for ordinary people. Moreover, as a result of the household budget, shopping frequency is also different between the rich and the poor. Wealthy citizens spend a huge amount of time going to enormous shopping malls, whereas it only takes normally a little time for the poor to buy groceries in small markets on a daily basis.
Geographical location is also one of the most significant factors forming a person’s shopping habit. The higher expenditure on shopping in big cities than in towns originates from the higher number of commercial places in cities. In addition, people living in towns can provide themselves with food by planting and breeding so they only go shopping to buy other products such as clothes, groceries and equipment, which are unnecessary to buy daily. As a result, inhabitants in cities have a tendency to go shopping more frequently than those in the countryside.
In summary, the age group seems to be less influential in comparison with budget and location in deciding an individual’s shopping habit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, in addition, in summary, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28125 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9121139598 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6015625 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.713082924 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.909090909 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230834423239 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865536152464 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433416021938 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142664431686 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471213967396 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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