Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
In this day and age, a highly controversial issue relates to whether it is good to prohibit extreme sports like sky diving and skiing due to their danger or not. Some countries have already set up the idea with positive and negative outcomes. This essay will analyze the both sides of the argument before a reasoned conclusion is decided upon.
On the one hand, some people contemplate that such kind of extreme sports are very hazardous to people's lives. It is not the same as they reckon though. Hazard is observed in every bit of sport and so as to alleviate the risk of accidents, it is thought to be better to create the relevant vein and safety measures. Providing someone wants to give it a try one type of extreme sports, attending proper training courses definitely deters him or her from suffering from any injury which may transpire. Pretend that, in plethora of countries, there are many registered clubs and lessons specialized in training the amateurs for extreme sports in advance in case they receive satisfaction without facing accidents and they are permanently kept company with experienced professionals.
On the other hand, everything may not take place as we intend. Albeit improved safety and well-trained lessons, people might come across accidents while testing extreme sports. In that, the risk of accidents and lousy incidents in extreme sports is far higher compared with casual sports such as football or tennis. It requires more boldness and courage which most of the people lose when they try out so called extreme sports. An example being, the death figure caused by extreme sports is going up which is a pity.
A minor drawback of banning the extreme sports never prevents me from concluding that after having a good grasp of risks and taking some appropriate precautions, there is no use worrying regarding accidents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, regarding, so, well, while, as to, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99677419355 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61300079467 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625806451613 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8239346015 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.642857143 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217894958499 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657604528002 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597028336891 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123753216773 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378221586727 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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