The diagram below shows how sports shoes are made.
The diagrammatic representation depicts the manufacturing and distribution of sports shoes.
Overall, it can be manifested that the production of shoes is a time consuming process which takes one and half year commencing with the design and culminating with the shoes being distributed.
First of all, the pattern of shoes are designed on computers and on the basis of this designs, the raw materials such as leather or fabric are collected from tannery or mill respectively with the addition of rubber sole from a discrete industry. After that various shapes of these are formed with the help of sticking machines as well as upper parts are attached with bottoms with the help of glue and lastly the laces are tied on the shoes. Finally, the shoes are ready.
Once the shoes have been made, they are packed into boxes of dozen and then into a large container which contain 5500 pairs of shoes. This is followed by distribution to the vendors from where they are either sent to local shops or is send to other places through cargo. The entire process takes around 18 months.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...signed on computers and on the basis of this designs, the raw materials such as leat...
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...ey are either sent to local shops or is send to other places through cargo. The enti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, lastly, so, then, well, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85945945946 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58289026731 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610810810811 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.4650264115 43.030603864 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.375 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.23603664747 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108958918488 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508545600311 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451573848988 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662439491092 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123665823045 0.0819641961636 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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