Some people prefer to live in small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Earth is divided into some parts such as, towns, cities, states, and countries. People live in places where they belong to. Some people move to different places for different reasons. I believe, in big cities, there are higher education facilities, and more employment opportunities than in small towns. Life in big city is faster, more comfortable, and convenient than in small towns. So, I would like to live in big city.
To begin with, higher education and more employment opportunities are available in big cities. From my own experience, I grew up in small town and completed my graduation there only. I wanted to continue my studies, but that was not available in our town. So, I moved to big city, and now I can see the different between small town and big cities. Like me, there are many other people who move to big cities for these two reasons, which are higher education and employment opportunities.
In addition, there are good transportation facilities available in big cities, such as buses, trains, etc. Nowadays, population in big cities is increasing day by day and big cities are becoming crowded. It is difficult to travel with our own vehicle and parking is also very costly. Public transportation is convenient and, cheap, therefore people prefer it to travel in big cities. On the other hand, in small towns, there are no more options to travel from one place to another. You should have your own vehicle in small cities. In big cities, there are also more entertainment options like, theater, parks, restaurants, malls, and, super market. In small town, there are very limited options for entertainment.
Finally, where to live is personal choice and is different from person to person. Many people like to live in small towns where they grew up such as, farmers. Some people like calm places with less population and pollution like small towns. In big cities, we could meet many new people from different places or countries. We could learn and experience lots of thing in our day to day to life. In small town, everything is same for many years, but in big cities, life is changing and interesting so, I always like to live in big cities.
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Thanks for your feedback.
I will try to follow the pattern you suggested from now on.
Regards,
Ana.
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 158 200
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.523 7.5
You don't need to put a lot of reasons to support your idea. Two or three reasons are enough. But you need to argue and support those two or there reasons. The writing pattern is like this:
para1: introduction. make your choice A or B
para2: reason 1. why
para3: raeson 2. why
para4(optional): reason 3. why
para5: conclusion.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.0 out of 6 (or 22 in 30)
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 372 350
No. of Characters: 1726 1500
No. of Different Words: 158 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.392 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.64 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.555 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 110 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.523 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.542 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.363 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.503 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.152 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5