Dear Mr. Sam Gill,
I'm Will Smith, and I travelled in one of your buses from Delhi to Mumbai on July 5, 2014.
As it was a long journey of 36 hours so I kept my suitcase with the luggage manager, Mr. Shyaam, who kept it on the roof of the bus. Initially, I was not comfortable that they were keeping my suitcases on the rooftop. When I explained my concern to Mr. Shyaam, he promised that it was a standard procedure, and suitcase is safe from damage and theft.
However, upon arrival on 7 July at Mumbai I found that it was badly damaged. It was a multicolor suitcase with the first letter of...
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