Adverts are important for consumers and businesses. However, in order to generate buying impulse among consumers, some advertisers have gone too far and have made advertisements that are immoral and cannot be accepted by society. I personally believe certain methods of advertising are completely unacceptable to society.
Firstly, advertisements with unrealistic features are unacceptable. These advertisements create buying impulse among potential buyers and when they do not find similar results after usage of product the way it was shown in the ad-copy they feel cheated. For example, there wa...
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Sentence: As a result, many buyers criticised it and later on, in the interest of public a legal case was filed against the advertiser.
Error: criticised Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
Don't repeat words, phrases, and sentences, or as less as possible like 'unacceptable'
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 296 350
No. of Characters: 1586 1500
No. of Different Words: 172 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.148 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.358 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.033 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 121 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 100 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.733 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.985 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.317 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.598 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.084 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5