Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time, others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both views and say your opinion.
On the one hand, there are a wide range of reasons which be taken into consideration that children should be controlled and monitored. Firstly, since children are inexperienced, they need to adults who broaden children’s horizons. Therefore, taking part in organized group activities might provide children with new opportunities to develop their skills. Secondly, organized group activities provide a unique learning experience. Thus, children can take full advantages of people’s behavior in the group. For instance, children who take part in these group are good at team working.
On the other hand, children who are learnt how to occupy themselves on their own are more likely to succeed in their life. The main reason is that these children are under special circumstance which it lets them to know their abilities. Moreover, they might face different problems that they should find solution lonely. Therefore, they become experienced. Another reason is that these children have more confident and they can use their skills in different situation because they are independent and make decision lonely.
In conclusion, although parents should encourage their children to use their free time, they should let them to find their own way in life. From my point of view, children should consult with their parents and use their experience in parallel with their own way of thinking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35159817352 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71809574018 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561643835616 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1323563716 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1538461538 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411605481212 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150230483953 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104922579497 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282596196195 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657484905325 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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