University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, the number of university students, who are enthusiastic to have educational courses in foreign countries, have been gradually increasing. While there are both advantages and disadvantages associated with this topic, the positive aspects take precedence over the drawbacks.
Study in institutes around the world would be beneficial for variety of factors. One of the main factors is being independent, in other word, foreign students learn how they can stand on their own feet in different circumstances. Frequently, students are living far from their parents with having only a budget during their education to combat with unpredictable happenings. Therefore, they gain managing skills such as, saving money for rainy days. Sometimes, foreign students had to work part time to handle their cost of living. For instance, my brother is a kind of person who being independent after his education in other country because he forced to work during his education for housing cost and currently he lives separately from my parents.
Despite the existence of benefits, foreign students may have culture shock experience when they encounter with different culture and religion due to communicate with aboriginal people with diverse beliefs which can usually lead to bother students. Students normally are shocking with some exotic ceremony or special behaviors which are prohibited in their religion or culture. Consider that an Indian student who worships cows wants to study in Iran, a country in which people have some particular events such as Ghorban Eid that they kill cows as a gift for god, so this ritual may be irritating for the Indian student.
In conclusion, although there are a few disadvantages such as culture shock regarding the study in abroad, there are plethora of advantages namely, being autonomous that outweigh the negative aspects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44673539519 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80795338512 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60824742268 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6278280531 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.083333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200950456456 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741747550998 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710808718847 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134275612742 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824354360203 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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