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technology usage proportion in the UK
The line graph illustrates the proportion of four different types of home updated technology access in every family in the UK over the period of seven years between 1996 and 2003.
What stands out from the graph is that, there were upward trends in all domestic accesses which are CD player, Mobile phones, PC and online internet. Another interesting point is that music paler was the most popular electronic device over the period of time while internet access was the least one.
As regards CD player usage proportion, it started at 60% in 1996 and then improved gradually by the following...
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