Alcohol abuse is becoming more and more common in many countries. What are some of the problems it causes and what are the solutions?.
Alcohol, a toxic drink when consume in excess is becoming increasingly popular in several countries across the world and its abuse has led to some adverse effects on individuals life. This essay will identify some of this effects and provide possible solution.
Excessive intake of alcohol has led to increase in health related issues in recent times. The main causes of psychosis, depression, anxiety and digestive organ damage has been linked to excessive consumption of alcohol. For instance, a recent study on brain disorder in America reveals that alcohol is responsible for 80% of psychosis cases. Also, alcohol abuse interfere with person's self image, thereby interrupting individuals relationship with family, friends and colleagues. Furthermore, when alcohol is consume in excess more than the daily recommended dosage, it can leads to dangerous behaviors that can make individual to become harmful to the society. For example, I read an article two weeks ago about cultism and the article reveals that student that engage in cultism abuses alcohol.
There are measures that can be put in place to solve the problem of drug abuse. Firstly, government should made a stipulated policy that will guide the sales of alcohol. For instance, bars and restaurants should be guided not to sell alcohol that exceeds the daily recommended dosage according to gender. Secondly, government and local authorities should create an awareness program that will enlighten the public about the health issues that may arise when alcohol is taking in excess. This will thereby makes individuals to be responsible for their health.
In conclusion, it is difficult to restrain people from consuming alcohol as it has become widely known in many regions. This essay has discussed problems caused by alcohol abuse and possible measures that need to be put in place so as to eradicate these problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Suggestion: consumed
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
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Suggestion:
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...e measures that need to be put in place so as to eradicate these problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69390051784 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576666666667 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9393496905 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200021041416 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626843562821 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426035459223 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126628146299 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464231505183 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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