The bar chart provides the data about the percentage of certain beverage consumption monthly routine among Australian people whose drinking preferences compared among five different cities.
Overall, going to a café for coffee or tea is the most popular manner among Australians in almost all given countries, except with the 1 percent privilege instant coffee which is bought in Adelaide.
Turning to the details, Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart are presented the top three highest results in terms of drinking tea or coffee in a café ,accounting above than 60 percent , while in the capital the popularity of fresh coffee showed the highest result by reaching around 43 percent, in comparison with the rest. Moreover, in last four week the least favorite drink were fresh coffee among Brisbane an Adelaide consumers accounting almost 34 percent whereas the purchase of instant one were the most frequent in Brisbane and Hobart by almost 53 and 54 percent respectively. Furthermore, the percentage
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32278481013 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71370347372 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658227848101 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.852691501 43.030603864 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.2 112.824112599 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168584367409 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804831723264 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569617030231 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112685642927 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221577975972 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.