in some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people
Having own properties such as houses or apartments are the one of the most essential stereotypes among certain countries in comparison with renting apartments. Long term investment and high level of privacy are one of the main advantages of property owners whereas high upfront costs with illiquidity are the main disadvantages.
One of the principal advantages among the importance of owning houses is the long term investment which provides the greater profit after certain time and the assets are invested for yourself. In most cases, individuals want to have savings for future retirement while using it at the same time, homeownership is the most great way to accomplishing both. Take an example, the federal Reserve Bank reports that the average price of homes sold in the USA rose 28 percent in 10 years starting in 2009. As the result property owners can ensure the possible future renting incomes as well as total freedom while living in own house.
The main disadvantages associated with property ownership is the increasing the percentage of upfront costs and taxes year by year. Furthermore, the value of houses can not be sell as quickly as stocks or other assets while the owner have to still keep making mortgage payments until selling. For example, instead of putting extra perks to other assets and investment, home owners should consider about closing costs on mortgage which can run from 2 to 5 percent of the purchase price, including taxes, insurance, home inspection.
To conclude, benefits of house ownership brings to total freedom and the possible future income perks must be weighed against the drawbacks, such as illiquidity and other upfront payment requirements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, so, still, well, whereas, while, as to, for example, such as, as well as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18613138686 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75098488605 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580291970803 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.0412234473 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.1 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146201174677 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567232029282 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559225800606 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805374116865 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057959215378 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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