the graph below gives the information from 2008 report about consumption of energy in usa since 1980 with projections until 2030
The line chart illustratethe information generated from report in the year 2008 about the consumption of energy from variety of fuel sources in USA from the year 1980 to 2030.
Overall, energy consumed from sources like petrol, oil and coal increased over the period of time while no such deviation could be seen in utilization of energy from other sources throughout the period. However, more units of energy was consumed from petrol and oil than others.
In 1980, approximately 4 quadrillion units of energy generated from hydropower,solar/wind and nuclear were consumed in USA and with the time it will rise to onl;y 1% and reached 5% in 2030. Similarly, coal and natural gas consumption was near about 15 quadrillion units which showd a steady growth and reached at about 27 quadrillion units while natural gas consumption was 20% which declined with time.
However, petrol and oil constituted 35 quadrillion units of energy , being the highest source of generating energy rose with time period and reached to approximately 50% in 2030.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15882352941 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98059797636 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.0878771586 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.166666667 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289221220603 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160836904701 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10868619116 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197677195958 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114626847367 0.0819641961636 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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