You have heard about plans to build new apartments in a public park near your home. You want to give your opinion about this. Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper. In your letter
1. Explain how you learnt about these plans
2. Say what you think of the park
3. Give your opinion on the plans
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to bring you to the notice that there is a planning to construct new infrastructure in a one and only left vacant place of the areas like ‘Will Street’ and ‘Bill Street’. I think the idea will get the negative outcome on the near side community using the park.
Firstly, nearby community had hardly convinced their children to play outdoor rather than stuck in the indoor technological games. Therefore, if the idea got applied then the toddlers will again make computer and mobile their leisure passing tool.
Secondly, senior citizens who live nearby used this park as gathering arena where the gather around for doing exercise and chit chats. However, this plan will make them lonely. Moreover, youth is also using this park for morning exercise and evening gatherings.
To summarize, in my opinion the idea behind the park destruction will hamper the locals living nearby to great extent. I request you to publish one article pertaining the issues I mentioned to you to aware the government about these negative repercussions in your esteem newspaper.
Hope to receive the positive response from you.
Yours faithfully,
Sunny
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10769230769 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57477777776 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702564102564 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2939552537 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5454545455 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 4.34317383033 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25121784456 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850078264853 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786948152351 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116509152691 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856314080121 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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