Many people in some countries believe that having their own homes is extremely necessary comparing with renting flats or apartments. There are many possible reasons such as cultural believes, people’s inner hope (which could be thought as human’s nature). Also following with many practical issues such as status and high-risk renting environment. After discussing these factors, I would illustrate my own opinion.
Two reasons which are very general and obvious could be discussed primarily. At the first place, certain cultural believes could cause this idea inevitably. Even though this is not a common issue in modern society, it still happens around people and could guide their thoughts unconsciously. For example, in Chinese culture, getting your own home sometimes is even more important than having no hires. Also, may people are taught about this belief when they are young so they might follow this instruction without notice. In addition, in the inner heart, everyone is longing for a warm and stable home that they could return no matter they are depressed or anxious. In this case, getting homes just belonging to themselves would take the first position in their mind.
There would be more practical reasons that are needed to explain besides those ideological factors above. Firstly, human’s vanity could drive their mind to this thought, though this might not be the main reason. After gaining high salary or working in a well-paid company, certain people always have the tendency to show off in front of their friends or isomerism. The best way to fulfill their false pride is to buy houses as their own property. Another serious issue that appears frequently in the society is the vulnerability of the renting system. Some house holders who have a lot on their minds always try different means to get money from tenants. Although this behavior is prohibited by the government, it would not be extinct due to human’s greed.
In conclusion, there are all kinds of reason for people who tend to want to have their own homes instead of renting some, both objective and subjective factors. In my opinion, if a person have the financial ability to purchase a house, just have one for yourself or your family. If no, then rent a flat and work harder.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'beliefs' (noun) instead of believes (verb)?
Suggestion: beliefs
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Message: Did you mean 'beliefs' (noun) instead of believes (verb)?
Suggestion: beliefs
...y. At the first place, certain cultural believes could cause this idea inevitably. Even ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, may, so, still, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05585106383 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49559934096 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593085106383 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.416803818 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.5238095238 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9047619048 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225788836899 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638468382764 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043641514167 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13572293175 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355156178351 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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