Some people focus on news in their country while others think it is more important to be aware of international news Discuss both views and give your opinion

The world is developing each day, some people think that people should focus news on their country. However, many people claim that people have to know awareness of internation news. The essay we will discuss about people should focus new in country or knowledge news of internation news.
Firstly, some people think that focus on news in their country. It is true that people can be aware around of the happenings around them so they could be more well-prepare to deal with upcoming events. if fact, local and nation often provide their audiences a lot of knowledge and information about economy, traffic, army and weather and different aspect in life. People will in turn know what to do and not to do to avoid problem. For example, the reports of weather would prove to be useful resident as they
can choose other day to go outside. This could be avoid the bad weather, due to making their daily lives less stressful.
In contrast, many people claim think people do not should ignore news internation. In the modern world, having access to foreign news is important since it can help people broaden their mind and perspective. in other words, their knowledge about economy, culture, political and social. This means that This avoids conflicting conditions and cultural shocks if they migrate to these areas.Morover, the news about billionaire and developed countries, people can follow similar path to success and avoid failure. For instance, during the coronavirus pandemic, goverment offical could learn about the way other nations did to prevent virus. There is no denying that a smart sustained approach could prevent financial and human loss of their fields
In conclusion, some people focus on news in their country while others think it is more important to be aware of international news. It is believed that many people claim people have to know awareness of internation news.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in other words, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03184713376 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53258211501 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515923566879 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6472031552 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455462643773 0.244688304435 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171558627767 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137480802742 0.0667982634062 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302972267808 0.151304729494 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.191439156767 0.056905535591 336% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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The world is developing each day, some p...
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...or knowledge news of internation news. Firstly, some people think that focus on...
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...nd nation often provide their audiences a lot of knowledge and information about...
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... and information about economy, traffic, army and weather and different aspect in...
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...not to do to avoid problem. For example, the reports of weather would prove to be...
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...ing their daily lives less stressful. In contrast, many people claim think peo...
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...l shocks if they migrate to these areas.Morover, the news about billionaire and develop...
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...ped countries, people can follow similar path to success and avoid failure. For i...
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...id to prevent virus. There is no denying that a smart sustained approach could pr...
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...nancial and human loss of their fields In conclusion, some people focus on news...
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...s. It is believed that many people claim people have to know awareness of interna...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in other words, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03184713376 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53258211501 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515923566879 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6472031552 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455462643773 0.244688304435 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171558627767 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137480802742 0.0667982634062 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302972267808 0.151304729494 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.191439156767 0.056905535591 336% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.