Some people believe that spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the tendency to send each other messages and e-mails is becoming popular. Hence, it is often argued if spoken or written communication is more favorable. As for me, conversation by messages is convenient, because you have enough time to think about text and check it.
Firstly, if people use written communication, they have the opportunity to ponder thoroughly the information in the letter. Some people, typically, feel discomfort when they see the interlocutor. They can confuse or forget information and show themselves as a not smart person. Therefore, certain people are more confident, when they have time to check their messages and after all they send it to somebody. Besides, some social media give the chance to change or delete messages. Thus, the method to write letters is more convenient to compare with spoken conversation, which implies spontaneous speech. For example, according to the research of British sociologists more than 65 percent of people feel confidence if they communicate with messages.
Secondly, written communication is useful in international conversation. Sometimes, people, who have business with companies and partners from other countries, do not meet or call by Skype owing to different time zones. They can send emails, therefore, and ask about meetings or continue to solve the problems using messages. In addition, It regards situations when people travel in other countries and they are not able to phone relatives or colleges due to absence of internet or mobile connection, in this case they are forced to use emails. For instance, the survey of travel companies showed that less than 10 percent of people call their relatives during a trip in contrast to 70 percent who send messages and 20 percent who do not connect with anyone.
In conclusion, I can say that some people prefer to use written communication for many reasons, but spoken conversation continues to be comfortable for other people. To my mind, communication with letters has benefits in different cases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, after all, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27469135802 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9568658332 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552469135802 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9051225553 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.529411765 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6470588235 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240946823955 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831480828002 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806104294005 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162487042686 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423420380064 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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