The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The diagrams illustrate the structure of a wave-energy machine in the first image and situation of such machine in relation to the closeness and waves of water.
Overall,the wave-energy machine is rectangular in shape and consists of two almost equal size chambers ( bottom and top) divided by a wall in between, which has two opening for air passage. Likewise, there are two choices for installation of this machine, close or away from the shore.
In regards to the design of the wave-energy machine, it has two chamber with a divider in the middle which has two opening on each side controlled by two one way valves. Over half of the bottom chamber is filled with water, which is coming from one way movement of waves through the opening at the right side of the bottom. The water evaporate and become hot and light air. This hot air enter into the upper vessel through the left sided entrance of the divider and made the turbine wheels spin and finally escape at the top right side of the machine. As a result of the rotatory effect of wheels electricity is produced and stored in generator for future use. Furthermore, cool air entering the machine through the upper left side, make the wheels stop rotating and finally exit through the one way valve at the middle divider to the lower chamber.
on the other hand, there can be two possible locations of wave-energy machine. One of them is situated close to the shore, on shallow waves which is small in size and installation cost is low. This type of machine produces low amount of energy from small waves. Conversely the one which is further away from the shore located in deep water level. This variety is larger in size, installation cost is high and generate higher amount of energy from large-waves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...closeness and waves of water. Overall,the wave-energy machine is rectangular in s...
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Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: rectangular
.... Overall,the wave-energy machine is rectangular in shape and consists of two almost equal size c...
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Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nsists of two almost equal size chambers bottom and top divided by a wall in betw...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
...chine, close or away from the shore. In regards to the design of the wave-energy machine, ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...middle divider to the lower chamber. on the other hand, there can be two possib...
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Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: small
...to the shore, on shallow waves which is small in size and installation cost is low. This typ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... on shallow waves which is small in size and installation cost is low. This type ...
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Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Conversely,
... low amount of energy from small waves. Conversely the one which is further away from the ...
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Line 7, column 365, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: larger
...ed in deep water level. This variety is larger in size, installation cost is high and generate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, first, furthermore, likewise, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 965.302439024 152% => OK
No of words: 308.0 196.424390244 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75324675325 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46620777839 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 106.607317073 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487012987013 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 283.868780488 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3962148921 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.571428571 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132858301798 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531290993957 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399960529756 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100582514669 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357341602647 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.