You have organized to go on holiday with your friend. However, you must change your plans.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
1. Tell them how much you are looking forward to the holiday.
2. Explain why you must change your plans.
3. Suggest alternative arrangements.
Dear Rose,
I am writing this epistle to let you know that due to some medical urgency at my place, we will have to postpone our holiday for maximum two weeks.
I was super exited for our trip this weekend as a long wait was going to be over with our holiday. I had almost completed my shopping along with the packing yesterday and as agreed upon, I made all the necessary arrangements for camping too by taking help from a local vendor. Not only this, I also got my car washed as you categorically told me to do so.
Sometimes, the Almighty has His own plans for us! Until yesterday, grandmother was fine but later at night she complaint of breathing issue and we had to rush her to hospital. Owing to the condition of my grandmother, I am really sceptical that we shall be able to go this week at least. She has been kept under observation for 72 hours at the most.
I think, we can reschedule our trip and can plan for 5th September 2020 as it is the weekend and by that time things will be pretty okay. Let me know if this date suits you, else we can go by your convenience and comfort any day after 4th September.
Yours truly,
Navpreet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... was going to be over with our holiday. I had almost completed my shopping along ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, at least, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37614678899 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44145316242 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669724770642 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.0433137908 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142249526068 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641154622577 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623264018335 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785638504588 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374197697117 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.