Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea separating the islands, allowing the deer to travel over it. Unfortunately, according to reports from local hunters, the deer populations are declining. Since these reports coincide with recent global warming trends that have caused the sea ice to melt, we can conclude that the purported decline in deer populations is the result of the deer's being unable to follow their age-old migration patterns across the frozen sea.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The author concludes that global warming is an influential factor for decline of the Arctic deer in Canada’s arctic regions. He comes to this conclusion based on the report from local hunters. The author assertion might be true, but these three claims must be substantiated in order to determine the credibility of the argument.
Firstly, the author assumes that the report from the local hunters are immaculate. It is possible that their method of searching of deer is flawed. They may not have required instruments as well as the process of enumeration may not be scientific. The search of deer in the region may be surficial. Deer may have gone to relatively cold areas where they were not thought to be found. This search can not determine the accurate number of deer living in the region. If this is true, then the argument does not hold water.
Moreover, the author assumes that global warming is a major factor contributing the decline of the number of deer. It might be possible that the local law enforcement bodies might have reduced their interest in the artic regions that have increased hunting of the deer and due to less checking their transportation is easier. This increase in poaching can be a cause for decrease in the number of the deer. Also, increase of people settlement in the less cold areas and the areas where there is cold for certain period of the year have caused to endanger the habitat of deer and reduce it population. If any of these scenarios have merit, then the conclusion of the argument is significantly weakened.
Finally, the author assumes that the effect of global warming is high at present. Global warming may be inchoate, and have not played such huge role to melt the ice of artic regions. Also, if global warming has occurred the cold areas would be relatively hot and the grass that the deer feed on would grow expanding the areas of living of the deer. If this is the case, then the persuasiveness of the argument is hindered.
In conclusion, the argument, as it stands now is considerably flawed due to its reliance on unwarranted assumptions. If the author is able to provide evidence to these three explanations (perhaps from a systematic study approach), then the viability of the argument can fully be evaluated.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 391 350
No. of Characters: 1837 1500
No. of Different Words: 173 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.447 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.698 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.587 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 126 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 61 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.619 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.371 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.322 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.322 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.065 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.6327345309 127% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 28.8173652695 94% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 2260.96107784 83% => OK
No of words: 391.0 441.139720559 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81585677749 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68023125174 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 204.123752495 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43989769821 0.468620217663 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 705.55239521 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0104089935 57.8364921388 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 119.503703932 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.619047619 23.324526521 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.70786347227 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184933505815 0.218282227539 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599837591977 0.0743258471296 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053395050606 0.0701772020484 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104023774586 0.128457276422 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476813883267 0.0628817314937 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.3799401198 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.3550499002 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.5979740519 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 98.500998004 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 12.3882235529 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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