having different teachers
It goes without saying that education is the plays an important role in human being’s life, therefore, the ruling classes should have a practical plan for education system, in which quite a few people have been upbringing constantly. As my perspective, children should have the variety of teacher because not only learn they how to come up with make connection with other people but also they could earn more experiences.
First of all, children should learn how make their communication, which is have a direct effect on their future, so that having different teacher help them learn how make connection with the variety of people.
Secondly, having different teacher causes children be familiar with the verity of perspective. For instance, when I was child I have different teacher for each year of elementary school, who had different idea about life, one of them believed that human beings just live in this world, so that she always went to trip and spend all his money, in other words, she lives in the moment. On the other hand, the other teacher, believed that people should save their money and make a great life for their children, so that she worked hardly, as well as, she saved all money that earned them. I love both of them, so they have a great effect in my life. I choose a middle method for my life, I believed that, I should live in the moment, while I be aware about my future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 76, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... how make their communication, which is have a direct effect on their future, so tha...
^^^^
Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
...ll his money, in other words, she lives in the moment. On the other hand, the other teacher, ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 521, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put before the verb 'worked'.
Suggestion: hardly worked
...at life for their children, so that she worked hardly, as well as, she saved all money that e...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 716, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
...my life, I believed that, I should live in the moment, while I be aware about my future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, as well as, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68825910931 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4070656046 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554655870445 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.011175348 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.75 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.875 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.625 7.06120827912 250% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318365094497 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164984446227 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122717923222 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235578470617 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435210259701 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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