You must prepare a final project. Which style would you prefer. a) giving a class presentation b)
design a posture c) write an essay
According to me, is just a everyone aspect are being in their nature of deciding both optimistic and
pessimistic for the three kinds .By the way satisfied sense of preference deals with my own individual
fashion as that I would incline towards make-up a posture that is been an easy and feasible method of
developing a understanding final projects rather than to go with a classroom presentation or to write
with an clear essay about the project in detail. Further explanation about my choice of style is explored
with my justified experiences and relevant reasons in this upcoming below essay.
Basically, during my leisure evening hours that I liked and eagerly concentrated regarding extracurricular
activities as certified computer training courses and at last completed, when I am in grade level studies
of higher secondary classes. So this implementation where helped me in many ways like that of in
upgrading my career as that tried many posture creations in summer vacation with friend for the
competitions held in my higher education institution. As part of that one of my postures design on the
topic: Natural herbal therapy verses conventional medicines were awarded in first place among others
because of my best skillful technical creation of my posture that has obtained many appreciations from
the teaching and invigilating staff.
Most of all, I am little bit vague and slow in writing as of in normal paragraph itself, if its essay means i
feels somehow more difficult because unfortunately in my lower classes i met with an accident in my
right hand middle finger that has been severly injured by impeller cutter blades while grinding mixer for
making food that made me or my inner potency towards writing very slow and been frustrated alsways
time span of exam end up before of my completion, thus acquired me a less grades in literature subject.
Furthermore I am not that very much good enough in conveying the prominent ideas over the oral
documentary presentations because mostly my concepts of delivering handles lots and lots of notes
which are not necessary usually give up a points in confused manner due to my nervous attitude that
has been created a bad impact on myself to the professor or examiner.
On behalf of above illustrated reasons and justification for my character that I firmly rely on second
category as of designing a posture would be finest way of my choice
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
According to me, is just a everyone aspect are being in...
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Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
According to me, is just a everyone aspect are being in their natu...
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Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'everyone'?
Suggestion: a; everyone
According to me, is just a everyone aspect are being in their nature of dec...
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Line 2, column 32, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...tic and pessimistic for the three kinds .By the way satisfied sense of preference...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
...c and pessimistic for the three kinds .By the way satisfied sense of preference d...
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Line 4, column 12, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...easy and feasible method of developing a understanding final projects rather tha...
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Line 5, column 6, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...lassroom presentation or to write with an clear essay about the project in detail...
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Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... invigilating staff. Most of all, I am little bit vague and slow in writing as of in norm...
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Line 16, column 1, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'i' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'feel'
Suggestion: feel
...paragraph itself, if its essay means i feels somehow more difficult because unfortun...
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Line 16, column 72, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...cause unfortunately in my lower classes i met with an accident in my right hand ...
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Line 19, column 70, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun grades is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...re of my completion, thus acquired me a less grades in literature subject. Furtherm...
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Line 19, column 75, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'grade'?
Suggestion: grade
... my completion, thus acquired me a less grades in literature subject. Furthermore I a...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...e a less grades in literature subject. Furthermore I am not that very much good enough in ...
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Line 25, column 42, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the finest'.
Suggestion: be the finest
...ategory as of designing a posture would be finest way of my choice
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, regarding, second, so, thus, while, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08457711443 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88481719409 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629353233831 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.1344086022 248% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.381998349 48.9658058833 262% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 255.5 100.406767564 254% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.25 20.6045352989 244% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.75 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.53405017921 551% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148046669361 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640937369845 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516153250765 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0392747286527 0.150856017488 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468546863652 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.6 11.7677419355 235% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.73 58.1214874552 36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 10.1575268817 224% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.22 8.01818996416 140% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 86.8835125448 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 10.002688172 300% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.0537634409 219% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.