Some individual claim that scientific research should be carried out by the governments rather than private companies. While it is beneficial to let private companies conduct research , I think scientific research should be controlled by governments.
To begin with , there are two dangers of letting private companies conduct research . In terms of the quality and objectivity of the research itself , corporation may be tempted to manipulate result to maximize profits. There are various case that new results being introduced out hurriedly after inadequate trials. For example ,thalidomide , developed by a German company result in the birth of thousands of malformed children . From an ethical perspective ,leaving research into many areas such as genetic engineering in the hands of enterprise may have detrimental social consequences such as GM crops with unproven effect may damage the ecosystem as a result of meddling with nature.
Although governments have to allocate resources to other areas of public spending ,it is essential they take responsibility for conducting research . Firstly, the highest standard can be set by providing funds for university to carry out high-quality research to benefit society as a whole , not to gain competitive edge or break into new market. Knowledge thus attained can be shared worldwide through global academic community. Secondly government decision making is the best way to prioritize expenditure on specific area of research , taking consideration the needs of society , in the present and the future . One example is the development of renewable energy to meet growing demand.
In conclusion , I assert that government should bear sole responsibility for scientific research.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63846153846 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13179840093 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646153846154 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0255766009 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.769230769 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352649512018 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129787127194 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138602453625 0.0667982634062 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251397221589 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.180601671105 0.056905535591 317% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.