The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the region-wise information regarding its population and distribution of wealth by region. The unit is measured in percentage.
Overall, it is clear that the Asian continent posses less wealth compared to its population except for rich Asia pacific countries. While it is inversely proportional to the other mentioned continents.
The Population of China is highest globally followed by India and other pacific countries by 24%, 16%,16% respectively. Although the population is the same in both countries, India consumes less income compared to the other one. However, the Rich Asia Pacific countries show the opposite by having the third-highest global wealth with only 5% of the population.
The Population of the rest continental countries is less than 50% over the world. But, they have distributed income for North America and Europe in total is approximately 65% of the world's wealth. However, Africa shows a similar pattern of some Average Asian Countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...except for rich Asia pacific countries. While it is inversely proportional to the oth...
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Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...pe in total is approximately 65% of the worlds wealth. However, Africa shows a similar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, so, third, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51298701299 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01643471574 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603896103896 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2325983005 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1607774975 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602999495049 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847302222468 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111452118325 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894400768993 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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