Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice Write a letter to your friend In your letter say why a driving licence is advantageous recommend a driving school give any extra guidance tips.
Dear Simona,
I hope you find the letter in great health. I got your letter and was happy knowing that, finally you are giving thought to a driver's license. I say definitely go for it.
Firstly, having a license has few benefits. Namely, having a proof as photo ID apart from the flexibility to drive. Besides, the license can help you be insured based on the location.
Secondly, I can refer you to a good driving tutor who taught me the skill to drive. He is Mr. James from AMD Driving School. Recently he has increased his scope of area to teach so place should not be a problem.
At last, I would suggest you take 2 lessons from him and come to my place. After attending sessions, you can practice using my car as much as you need. This will help you save a few dollars. Let me know whenever you are ready.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best Wishes,
Sam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...re giving thought to a drivers license. I say definitely go for it. Firstly, h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42771084337 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26666983312 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698795180723 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2340745936 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.0 76.5299724578 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.0666666667 16.8248392259 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128155740247 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406173735796 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540762040354 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686556285184 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631741647825 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 8.37731958763 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.23 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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