"We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whose
views contradict our own."; disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning."
Do we learn more from people whose ideas we share in common than from those whose
ideas contradict ours? The speaker daims so, for the reason that disagreement can cause
stress and inhibit learning. I concede that undue discord can impede learning. Otherwise, in
my view we learn far more from discourse and debate with those whose ideas we oppose than
from people whose ideas are in accord with our own.
Admittedly, under some circumstances disagreement with others can be counterproductive
to learning. For supporting examples one need look no further than a television set. On today's
typical television or radio talk show, disagreement usually manifests itself in meaningless
rhetorical bouts and shouting matches, during which opponents vie to have their own message
heard, but have little interest either in finding common ground with or in acknowledging the
merits of the opponent's viewpoint. Understandably, neither the combatants nor the viewers
learn anything meaningful. In fact, these battles only serve to reinforce the predispositions and
biases of all concerned. The end result is that learning is impeded.
Disagreement can also inhibit learning when two opponents disagree on fundamental
assumptions needed for meaningful discourse and debate. For example, a student of
paleontology learns little about the evolution of an animal species under current study by
debating with an individual whose religious belief system precludes the possibility of evolution
to begin with. And, economics and finance students learn little about the dynamics of a
laissez-faire system by debating with a socialist whose view is that a centrv2ized power should
control all economic activity.
Aside from the foregoing two provisos, however, I fundamentally disagree with the speaker's
claim. Assuming common ground between two rational and reasonable opponents willing to
debate on intellectual merits, both opponents stand to gain much from that debate. Indeed it is
primarily through such debate that human knowledge advances, whether at the personal,
community, or global level.
At the personal level, by listening to their parents' rationale for their seemingly oppressive
rules and policies teenagers can learn how certain behaviors naturally carry certain
undesirable consequences. At the same time, by listening to their teenagers concerns about
autonomy and about peer pressures parents can learn the valuable lesson that effective
parenting and control are two different things. At the community level, through dispassionate
dialogue an environmental activist can come to understand the legitimate economic concerns
of those whose jobs depend on the continued profitable operation of a factory. Conversely, the
latter might stand to learn much about the potential public health price to be paid by ensuring
job growth and a low unemployment rate. Finally, at the global level, two nations with opposing
political or economic interests can reach mutually beneficial agreements by striving to
understand the other's legitimate concerns for its national security, its political sovereignty, the stability of its economy and currency, and so forth.
In sum, unless two opponents in a debate are each willing to play on the same field and by
the same rules, I concede that disagreement can impede learning. Otherwise, reasoned
discourse and debate between people with opposing viewpoints is the very foundation upon which human knowledge advances. Accordingly, on balance the speaker is fundamentally correct.
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- We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whose views contradict our own disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning 66
- No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study 66
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...we share in common than from those whose ideas contradict ours? The speaker daims...
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...r the reason that disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning. I concede t...
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...scord can impede learning. Otherwise, in my view we learn far more from discourse...
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...te with those whose ideas we oppose than from people whose ideas are in accord wi...
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Line 6, column 25, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'circumstances'' or 'circumstance's'?
Suggestion: circumstances'; circumstance's
...with our own. Admittedly, under some circumstances disagreement with others can be counter...
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...ent with others can be counterproductive to learning. For supporting examples one...
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...further than a television set. On todays typical television or radio talk show, d...
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... usually manifests itself in meaningless rhetorical bouts and shouting matches, d...
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... opponents vie to have their own message heard, but have little interest either i...
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...mmon ground with or in acknowledging the merits of the opponents viewpoint. Under...
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Line 11, column 15, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'opponents'' or 'opponent's'?
Suggestion: opponents'; opponent's
...or in acknowledging the merits of the opponents viewpoint. Understandably, neither the ...
^^^^^^^^^
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..., neither the combatants nor the viewers learn anything meaningful. In fact, thes...
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Line 12, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...rve to reinforce the predispositions and biases of all concerned. The end result ...
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Line 14, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...en two opponents disagree on fundamental assumptions needed for meaningful discou...
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Line 15, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...se and debate. For example, a student of paleontology learns little about the evo...
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Line 16, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...an animal species under current study by debating with an individual whose religi...
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Line 17, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...m precludes the possibility of evolution to begin with. And, economics and financ...
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...nts learn little about the dynamics of a laissez-faire system by debating with a ...
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Line 19, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... view is that a centrv2ized power should control all economic activity. Aside ...
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Line 21, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...fundamentally disagree with the speakers claim. Assuming common ground between tw...
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Line 22, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...onal and reasonable opponents willing to debate on intellectual merits, both oppo...
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Line 23, column 84, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...ts stand to gain much from that debate. Indeed it is primarily through such debate t...
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...gain much from that debate. Indeed it is primarily through such debate that human...
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Line 24, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ledge advances, whether at the personal, community, or global level. At the pe...
^^^
Line 26, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rationale for their seemingly oppressive rules and policies teenagers can learn h...
^^^
Line 27, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ertain behaviors naturally carry certain undesirable consequences. At the same ti...
^^^
Line 28, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tening to their teenagers concerns about autonomy and about peer pressures parent...
^^^
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Suggestion:
...learn the valuable lesson that effective parenting and control are two different ...
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Line 30, column 49, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g and control are two different things. At the community level, through dispassion...
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...e community level, through dispassionate dialogue an environmental activist can c...
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Line 31, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...erstand the legitimate economic concerns of those whose jobs depend on the contin...
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... operation of a factory. Conversely, the latter might stand to learn much about t...
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...blic health price to be paid by ensuring job growth and a low unemployment rate. ...
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... global level, two nations with opposing political or economic interests can reac...
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...lly beneficial agreements by striving to understand the others legitimate concern...
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...willing to play on the same field and by the same rules, I concede that disagreem...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can impede learning. Otherwise, reasoned discourse and debate between people with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, conversely, finally, however, if, look, so, for example, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3049.0 2235.4752809 136% => OK
No of words: 532.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73120300752 5.05705443957 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98204140616 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 215.323595506 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537593984962 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 935.1 704.065955056 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 4.38483146067 433% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.3802761684 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.041666667 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29166666667 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 39.0 4.97078651685 785% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 37.0 7.80617977528 474% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373502540023 0.243740707755 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939860026729 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11828116684 0.0758088955206 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741527596487 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104794839632 0.0667264976115 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 48.8420337079 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.1639044944 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 155.0 100.480337079 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...we share in common than from those whose ideas contradict ours? The speaker daims...
^^^
Line 2, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...r the reason that disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning. I concede t...
^^^
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...scord can impede learning. Otherwise, in my view we learn far more from discourse...
^^^
Line 4, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...te with those whose ideas we oppose than from people whose ideas are in accord wi...
^^^
Line 6, column 25, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'circumstances'' or 'circumstance's'?
Suggestion: circumstances'; circumstance's
...with our own. Admittedly, under some circumstances disagreement with others can be counter...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent with others can be counterproductive to learning. For supporting examples one...
^^^
Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...further than a television set. On todays typical television or radio talk show, d...
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... usually manifests itself in meaningless rhetorical bouts and shouting matches, d...
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... opponents vie to have their own message heard, but have little interest either i...
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...mmon ground with or in acknowledging the merits of the opponents viewpoint. Under...
^^^
Line 11, column 15, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'opponents'' or 'opponent's'?
Suggestion: opponents'; opponent's
...or in acknowledging the merits of the opponents viewpoint. Understandably, neither the ...
^^^^^^^^^
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..., neither the combatants nor the viewers learn anything meaningful. In fact, thes...
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Line 12, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...rve to reinforce the predispositions and biases of all concerned. The end result ...
^^^
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...en two opponents disagree on fundamental assumptions needed for meaningful discou...
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...se and debate. For example, a student of paleontology learns little about the evo...
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...an animal species under current study by debating with an individual whose religi...
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Line 17, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...m precludes the possibility of evolution to begin with. And, economics and financ...
^^^
Line 18, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...nts learn little about the dynamics of a laissez-faire system by debating with a ...
^^^
Line 19, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... view is that a centrv2ized power should control all economic activity. Aside ...
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Line 21, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fundamentally disagree with the speakers claim. Assuming common ground between tw...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...onal and reasonable opponents willing to debate on intellectual merits, both oppo...
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Line 23, column 84, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...ts stand to gain much from that debate. Indeed it is primarily through such debate t...
^^^^^^
Line 23, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...gain much from that debate. Indeed it is primarily through such debate that human...
^^^
Line 24, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ledge advances, whether at the personal, community, or global level. At the pe...
^^^
Line 26, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rationale for their seemingly oppressive rules and policies teenagers can learn h...
^^^
Line 27, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ertain behaviors naturally carry certain undesirable consequences. At the same ti...
^^^
Line 28, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tening to their teenagers concerns about autonomy and about peer pressures parent...
^^^
Line 29, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...learn the valuable lesson that effective parenting and control are two different ...
^^^
Line 30, column 49, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g and control are two different things. At the community level, through dispassion...
^^
Line 30, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e community level, through dispassionate dialogue an environmental activist can c...
^^^
Line 31, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erstand the legitimate economic concerns of those whose jobs depend on the contin...
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Suggestion:
... operation of a factory. Conversely, the latter might stand to learn much about t...
^^^
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...blic health price to be paid by ensuring job growth and a low unemployment rate. ...
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... global level, two nations with opposing political or economic interests can reac...
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Suggestion:
...lly beneficial agreements by striving to understand the others legitimate concern...
^^^
Line 37, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...willing to play on the same field and by the same rules, I concede that disagreem...
^^^
Line 38, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can impede learning. Otherwise, reasoned discourse and debate between people with...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, conversely, finally, however, if, look, so, for example, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3049.0 2235.4752809 136% => OK
No of words: 532.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73120300752 5.05705443957 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98204140616 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 215.323595506 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537593984962 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 935.1 704.065955056 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 4.38483146067 433% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.3802761684 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.041666667 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29166666667 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 39.0 4.97078651685 785% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 37.0 7.80617977528 474% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373502540023 0.243740707755 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939860026729 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11828116684 0.0758088955206 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741527596487 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104794839632 0.0667264976115 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 48.8420337079 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.1639044944 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 155.0 100.480337079 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.