Write about the following topic:
Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In the era of cutting-edge technology, computers are an essential key for humanity to develop our society to be more modern and convenient. without the existence of computers, there would be unable for global citizens to enjoy thousands of entertained materials, a huge database of knowledge and the wireless connection between people and government. that is why I sustainably agree that computers will and forever keep its value as a remarkable invention in the world.
First of all, education will be my ultimate choice for my explanation about the importance of computers. Especially in the pandemic of COVID-19, computers are critical not just students living in affected zones but teachers in different areas as well. when face-to-face teaching is restricted, online software such as Zoom, Microsoft Class and more is an alternative and effective choice for schools and universities. computers have helped thousands of students and learners in many countries and regions to share their lessons and knowledge without struggling with long-distance and institutions.
Secondly, I will discuss the economy as the most well-known purpose of computers in this field. In industrial activities, the programmes installed on the computer are being used widely in producing any products we can imagine and importantly, most of the processes are automatic. More or less, the decrease of using labours will allow companies to save thousands of dollars and increase production. Moreover, some careers that people do not have enough strength to do such as exploring the virus. creating robots, exploring the planets from thousands of kilometre and more are being solved by our computers. The more efficient computers can explore, the more advanced knowledge we have.
technologies are the trend of the globe and no one can avoid it unless they came from Ice Age. it is the truth that computers, somehow, makes some troubles when we are lost the ability to solve the basic problems by ourselves instead of checking online. Nonetheless, we can not waste our time to count how far is each planet in the galaxy by hand and ruler, modern advancements must be developed and the state leaders have responsibility for supporting and cooperating with technological companies because not just the economy is improved, healthcare and welfare services will improve to benefit our citizens.
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...ill improve to benefit our citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, well, such as, first of all, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 6.8 309% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 5.60731707317 410% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 965.302439024 209% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 375.0 196.424390244 191% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37066666667 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 3.73543355544 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00121456895 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 106.607317073 205% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 283.868780488 224% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4770952318 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.875 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4375 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135006099856 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04423585183 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285147559203 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805855578049 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254220898508 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 40.7170731707 297% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.