Write about the following topic:
Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
People's opinion differ as to whether or not computers are the most crucial development in the last centuries. It can not be denied that computers play an important roles in daily life, and human depends on computers deeply. I believe that it is an irreplaceable device in last centuries and for many years later.
The most useful function of computers is that it bring more information to human society. In fact, compared to the past, when the information sources was extremely limited and people could not access to the media easily, those things have been changed recently. In technology era, thanks to computers, with just one clicks, everywhere and anytime the information is accessed quickly and conveniently. There is evidence that the countries or organizations which are rich in data can have a high role in the trade markets. Without the internet, individuals can be obsolete and out-of-date with innovative technologies.
Besides the aspect of information, the computers are the fundamental tools to develop and implement other significant utilizationin our life. With the help of computers, there are increasing break-through developments such as Internet, applications and smart devices. Specifically, the Internet only implemented after the birth of computers, and the benefit of Internet is enormous. By using it, we can have more utilities like social networks to establish relationships, open MOOC learning, online meetings. The applications and smart devices also improve our living qualities, like the robots help human cleaning home, do tough and dangerous works.
In conclusion, the computers bring massive benefits to our life and it can be considered the greatest inventions in the last one hundred years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
Peoples opinion differ as to whether or not computers are the most crucial develo...
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Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r as to whether or not computers are the most crucial development in the last cen...
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Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'role'?
Suggestion: role
...denied that computers play an important roles in daily life, and human depends on com...
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Line 5, column 472, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ial networks to establish relationships, open MOOC learning, online meetings. The...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, as to, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 965.302439024 152% => OK
No of words: 270.0 196.424390244 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44074074074 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07328191489 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 106.607317073 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 283.868780488 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.5062349638 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.928571429 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118865066647 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421402277662 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391337419539 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850702942399 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490694214271 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 40.7170731707 211% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.