Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I absolutely agree with that statement, because I think parents today are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past. I hold this view because of several reasons. First, parents had more children in the past than today, so they did not have enough time to being involved in their children's education and check their children assignments and homework person by person. Second, nowadays by technology development, demands for educational career have increased, since it was not necessary for individuals to educate for finding jobs in the past.
According to my point of view, in the past, parents had more children in compare with today, so, they did not have enough time to control children's homework and assignments. In other words, because parents today usually tend to have only one or two child, they have more chance to involve in their children's education than past generations, who had more children, even up to 10 child. For instance, if I want to compare my conditions related to my educational opportunities to my father's childhood conditions, I should say that because my father ,when he was a child, was living in family that had 5 children, his parents usually did not enough time to involve in his education, but when I was infant, I was living in a family that had only 2 child, so my mother could spend her time much in helping my homework and resolving my problems in my assignments. Besides, parents in the past were almost illiterate, therefore they could not be able to help their children in their education.
Moreover, taday, by technology development and cities modernization, demands for educational career have increased, while it was not necessary for people in the past to get profession and obtain educational career for finding a good job.
To illustrate, today, applying a good job requires a good resume' and educational career, so, parents prefer to spend much of their time on their children's education and involve in improving their educational skills to preparing them efficiently for the future.
Generally, I believe that parents today are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past, and it seems to me that implementing this method will help children in their future career.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-03-27 | Hossein2000 | 90 | view |
| 2023-02-02 | rodriannnn | 76 | view |
| 2022-09-02 | dnudlyjgtnudbphwev | 60 | view |
| 2022-08-23 | Hello GRE | 73 | view |
| 2021-12-25 | JoeyRussell07 | 83 | view |
- TPO 44 integrated writing skill 80
- TPO 30 integrated writing task 40
- Summarise the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubts on specific points made in the reading passage 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because the world is changing so quickly people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 81
- Do you agree or disagree In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to secure successful future Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 249, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'child' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'children'.
Suggestion: children
...ay usually tend to have only one or two child, they have more chance to involve in th...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 378, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'child' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'children'.
Suggestion: children
...s, who had more children, even up to 10 child. For instance, if I want to compare my ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 545, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ons, I should say that because my father ,when he was a child, was living in famil...
^^
Line 2, column 743, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'child' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'children'.
Suggestion: children
... was living in a family that had only 2 child, so my mother could spend her time much...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 215, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve in improving their educational skills to preparing them efficiently for the fu...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, i think, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02116402116 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80400318517 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441798941799 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.975326337 48.9658058833 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.545454545 100.406767564 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.3636363636 20.6045352989 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350049041456 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198848298325 0.076458572812 260% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156632774126 0.0737576698707 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242910335493 0.150856017488 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123561586454 0.0645574589148 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 11.7677419355 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.1575268817 163% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.