Sometimes we have move to other countries due to certain necessity such as getting a better job opportunity. Residing in a country where we have to speak foreign language may cause both social and practical issues to us. I completely agree with the statement where it may create both social and practical problems.
Firstly, this is because language holds an important key in doing communication. If we don't understand the daily language in a country we are living, we will more likely to find difficulties in interacting with people and telling people what we are thinking about. For instance, this happens to a person who moves to Taiwan but does not understand Chinese language, a language which most Taiwanese speak. As a result, he will struggle to have conversation with local people and to build connections in his workplace.
Secondly, language also holds important factor in adapting with local environment. If someone fails to understand the language, he will find obstacle in understanding our surroundings. For example, a person just moved to Russia but does not know Russian language. And this language is used in all public facilities and public transportation in Russia. Consequently, this person will most likely to fail in adapting with Russia's environment.
In conclusion, settling in a country where we have to speak foreign language may cause both social and practical problems to us, because language holds an important key in doing communication and language also holds important factor in adapting with local environment.
- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal Some people however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 61
- In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing railway lines for very fast trains between cities Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport Discuss both these vi 67
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'moved'.
Suggestion: moved
Sometimes we have move to other countries due to certain neces...
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Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...rtant key in doing communication. If we dont understand the daily language in a coun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26612903226 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00821585713 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504032258065 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4983770641 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276926568173 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100634605911 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919578136317 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189565985394 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924651745366 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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