Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sport or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
We can see many people around us participating in dangerous, life-threatening activities on regular basis. Although they are fully aware of the risks they still participate in such activities. So naturally, the question arises why do many people are attracted to dangerous sport or other dangerous activities? In my opinion, People participate in such events for the thrill and to appear strong and respectable in the society.
First, Most of us have a calm and well-balanced life with a 9 to 5 job, while we strive to achieve this calmness when we are young, it becomes extremely boring for some of us when we achieve that security. Bored of their regular life, the adventurous people try out different adventure sports such as bull run, bungee jumping, etc for the adrenaline rush. For example, Once I did bungee jumping and the experience was un-parallel. Free-falling into nothingness freshened my mind and I felt alive again.
Second, Sports have always been a way to show one's toughness. Many people especially men participate in adventure sports to show their toughness. Many of my friends participate in speed racing, although they know that without proper training and equipment racing can be fatal.
Third, Adventure sports create team bonding and friendships that stay on for a long time. It is the do-or-die moment that creates the best of the bonding. Take my friend Rahul for example he made an amazing friend Prakash while rock-climbing in extreme conditions. They were sorted in a group randomly and each was tasked with protecting the other one from falling down.
It is the extreme boringness of day-to-day life which pulls us towards adventure sports for most of the cases and we gain a fresh new perspective of life. While it is extremely dangerous all of us have complete liberty to participate in any adventure sports as long as proper safety standards are met.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hreatening activities on regular basis. Although they are fully aware of the risks they ...
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Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'job' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'jobs'.
Suggestion: jobs
...lm and well-balanced life with a 9 to 5 job, while we strive to achieve this calmne...
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: Bored with
...me of us when we achieve that security. Bored of their regular life, the adventurous peo...
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Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
..., Sports have always been a way to show ones toughness. Many people especially men p...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e gain a fresh new perspective of life. While it is extremely dangerous all of us hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, still, third, well, while, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04458598726 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87308454308 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582802547771 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1151765748 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1764705882 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159726618328 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563978436679 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977999577716 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089813767433 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709169882721 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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