Success is due only to hardwork. Luck does not make a person successful or unsuccessful. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific examples and reasons to explain your answer
It is implicit fact that hardwork is the key to success, where as sometimes luck provide opportunity to get break through in life. Presently , some masses consider that victory is only depend on hardwork , luck does not make a person successful or unsuccessful . However, I agree with this presentment and i would like to confabulate this in first and foremo paragraph.
To commence with there are umpteen points can be mentioned to support my favour. Firstly, competition amoung the present youth is mushrooming according to passage of time , owing to which every pupil is engaged in doing hardwork and every individual have aim to achieve some specific goals . For instance, recently a exam was organised name NEET ,in which mammoth of students took part but the institute that organised the exam need only countful students so, just because of it only that pupil can crack who had done lot of hardwork ,here luck does not matter. Further emphasizing my point of view, A person with good hardwork can get more job opportunities as he/she become habitual to give their hundred percent in every field owing to this a company simultaneously every sector of the society offer opportunity to enhance their living standard.
In addition, luck does not work most of time, it is only a rare case where luck matters but the hardwork is for whole life, a student with courage, hardwork never defeat in his/her life and it is well said that '' difficult roads always lead to beautiful destination '' this slogon reveals that individuals
should hustle now and relax later.
By and Large, always keep faith in hardwork nor in luck as hardwork is the key to success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91039426523 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62447508473 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620071684588 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.567483877 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.222222222 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23646815017 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10820921762 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987506018024 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131476676772 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090497410405 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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