Some schools are believing in streaming where as some believe that this will harm the ability of students.
Discuss both views and Give your Opinion.
Technogical revolution makes life convient as compare the ancient time. Some proponents raised their voice regarding institution of learning is best way to teach students and enhance their inner qualities whereas others differ that virtual teaching is better. Thus, after discussing both the viewpoints, I will take my stance with giving justified examples.
There are distinguishing reasons why visiting classroom is the greatest way of teaching. First and foremost reasons behind this phenomenon is that, bonding of tutor and learners can make stronger, if students is attending every lecture of their curriculum teacher. Also student may learn effectively way with fully concentration. As consequence, students can learn rapidly and performing well in their examination. In addition, class learning creates environment. Therefore, lerners can be souled their doubts at that time also some time teacher scolding on students and gave punishment for their unethical behaviour though they do not go towards integrally work and accuring life values. For instance, recent survey of Indian Authorities is evolutied that, top fortune persons of India were gotten success in their life because teacher plays significantly role to find their ability and their motivation by the help of teacher's few techniques and attending every lecture via class learning.
Discussing the other argument, we can not neglecte because it also have own benefits. To embark on, virtual class may be replicate of visiting class owing to technological era. It has visual effects though tender minds are fascinating to join the class. As a result, literacy ratio will rising automatically. However, some of phenomenon it will adversely impact on children's capabilities due to tempting advertisement and notification of social media platforms, it may impact on grade as well as development of emerging child. To illustrate, today due to Covid-19 pandamic circumstances, class learning is not possible hence, Zoom meeting app is become preference for every education sector but students are pay much attention on playing games and gossiping with their friends rather than learning something new.
To recapitulate, although, virtual meeting of education lecture is boon for present global health crisis time, it will not be replaced with in class teaching methods also it has tremendous benefits to enlightenment student's abilities.
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also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2046.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62087912088 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95115306818 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631868131868 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.7362508048 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.352941176 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115112104373 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364627582028 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034732335382 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757649912164 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311147035736 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.