It is said that travel broaden the mind. what can we learn by travelling to others countries? should we first explore our own countries? discuss.
No one can deny that, exploring different places can widen our mind and knowledge. There are many beautiful places around the world where people can visit as per their interest, however, I partially believe that every traveler should visit their own country first rather than foreign countries. This essay will support my view point on both arguments.
First and foremost, travelling is most exciting and memorable journey to every people who love to travelling different places and visiting abroad can be dream to many travelers. Journey to abroad csn provide many advantages to people, for example, they can experience the new technologies which might does not exist in their home country. Likewise, exploring many beautiful places, new languages, different culture, varieties of food and this can expand the knowledge of people in different perspectives and refresh their mind and soul.
However, as accepting the fact that exploring is important, however, travelers should give emphasis on own countries first. People should know about their own country’s different culture and ethics and explore the nature rather than others. It helps to widen their mind on various culture and ethics, own history and different beautiful places, that they can show their beauty of their home country to the world. likewise, it helps to contribute on growth of economy and encourage other people for travelling and helps to develop tourism sector. People always be exciting to travel abroad by ignoring beautiful places near of them.
In conclusion, travelling is exciting and adventurous journey and help to explore various knowledge of different sector. Every visitors should give importance on domestic travelling rather than international, hence, this can be more beneficial to own country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, likewise, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44244604317 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63991774013 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521582733813 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1529080576 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.384615385 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278753413305 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113215962929 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673748641626 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191599317868 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530332839136 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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