You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
some individuals state that, advertisement encourage us to buy more unecessary things, while other argue that, it helps peple to it helps to improve our life style. I totally support the idea that advertisement is important tools of our lives because it helps us to save our time & money and provide information of new launched product in the market.
Firstly, advertisement we found on newspaper, television, radio help us to compare the product and price while sitting inside the home. Comparison help us to get the best product with same price or lower price and we can utilize the remaining time on productive things or with family time. For example, people in canada always wait for the weekly flyer and compare the price with different store to buy groceries and other household things, which increase their saving by sitting at home.
Secondly, the easiest way to know about the new innovation, product launched in the market is advertisement. There are always new products lanunched which can make daily life easier and with the help of advertising we can get all the details of new products. for instance, every year iphone lanunched his new upgraded version of it and people know this because of advertisement. So, they can be ready when and where they can get new version of iphone. Adtionally, people replace their old household things to new version of it when they see the advertising which can help to improve their life style with ease.
In conclusion, advertising is becaming a crucial and informative to the people,however it can mislead the people by showing positive side only. But, everybody need to purchase the things with the correct judgement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01075268817 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7433686279 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530465949821 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1943131311 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241056181267 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914331375018 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044294716547 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141092291881 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04826771525 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.