The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Healthy life matters to those who have importance of maintaining health. In today's fast paced lifestyle, major section of populace believes that the median quality of people's health would be going down in coming years as compared with current time. I completely agree with this though process. This essay will enumerate various reasons along with examples.
Busy lifestyle may be first cause. Working class have to run to office early in the morning and with traffic jams, and late night workings, have actually no time left to spare for oneself. Work-life balance is disturbed. Secondly social media is keeping them occupied for their rest of time. There is peer pressure to be updated, to like and share posts on various platforms. So even if somebody decided to get time for exercise, its not getting priority in day's schedule.
In future, situation would be out-of-control with regards health. Society will have to bear physical and mental stress. This worse situation would occur due to materialistic, sedentary lifestyle, more competition due to more population, and intense rat-race. Take examples of more populated countries like China and India, where performance has to be on peak to avoid loosing job and hence late night - without pay - shifts. Access of disposable income, could make people spend heavily on junk food, which may make their body weak. Less movement and desk jobs can cause lifestyle diseases like BP and Heart problems in 40's. Work pressure and deadlines will make professionals psychological disturbed in coming time.
To sum up, there are challenges in coming time, with changes in the market, chances of getting health down are more due to work pressure, materialist lifestyle, less time to self. But there is remedy to every problem. Every individual should spare some time to oneself and try to remain healthy by exercise, yoga and meditation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ebody decided to get time for exercise, its not getting priority in days schedule. ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...t getting priority in days schedule. In future, situation would be out-of-control with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, as to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1868852459 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61008615476 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649180327869 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.1951025543 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128205413537 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384524638309 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354139362075 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800821730772 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431631156915 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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