Some people believe that to protect local culture, tourism should be banned in some areas whereas others think that change is inevitable and banning tourism will have no benefits. Discuss both sides and gives your opinion.
Tourism place a vital role in every individual life because when people are free they prefer to go historical place although some individual says that if you want to protect local culture then tools should be banned in some areas but a few human being think that change is necessary I agree with this motion and for the in this essay I will discuss each one and give some points to support my opinion
On the one hand if humans want to stop the trips in other areas then people cannot go outside for enjoying their holiday firstly if people not go outside then they will not able to follow the culture of that area because they have not any idea regarding the culture of other country secondly learning skill is possible only through tourism because if will go any other country or area for tourism then we can learn the cuisine of of that country for example famous actor they are do not follow the tradition of any other country because in the country tools have been banned so it is clear that tourism should be banned
To conclude I believe that to protect our culture it is not necessary that tools must be banned because if people want to follow the culture of other country then they can learn it through various networking techniques
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Suggestion: places
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Suggestion: done
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52212389381 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10189566461 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486725663717 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 226.0 20.2975951904 1113% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1022.0 106.682146367 958% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 226.0 20.7667163134 1088% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 75.0 7.06120827912 1062% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348117512782 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.348117512782 0.084324248473 413% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244388664732 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707546405922 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 112.9 13.0946893788 862% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -140.99 50.2224549098 -281% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 89.1 11.3001002004 788% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.42 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.29 8.58950901804 201% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 92.4 10.1190380762 913% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 10.7795591182 510% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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