You stayed at your friend’s house when you attended a conference in Australia. Unfortunately, you left a large envelope with some important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend.
Dear Harry,
I hope you are in the radiant health and best of the spirit.. When I came to Australia for a conference, it was very kind of you to let me stay at your home. I am thankful for that but unfortunately, I left very important documents at your home.
After attending the conference, I came back to your home. I took a catnap afterward as I had plenty of time left before catching up with the flight. I’m sure that I placed my envelope on the ride side of the bed. In the end, I was in a hurry hence I forgot about that envelope. The envelope contains pivotal documents that are essential for my work.
Therefore, I am asking you for a favor. Can you send me that envelope? As you can see, I might face some hurdles at my work so it would be great if you can post those documents to me. I can blow off the steam after receiving that envelope.
I'm keeping my finger crossed and certainly going for your response.
Best Regards,
Krishna
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| 2020-10-09 | krishyparms | 64 | view |
| 2020-10-09 | krishyparms | 73 | view |
| 2020-02-03 | dfriend01 | 67 | view |
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| 2019-09-16 | Syed_6 | 86 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 60, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...he radiant health and best of the spirit.. When I came to Australia for a conferen...
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Line 5, column 2, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... steam after receiving that envelope. Im keeping my finger crossed and certainly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, therefore, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27071823204 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49223328834 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585635359116 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2470280106 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.2142857143 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9285714286 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325089558987 0.216113520407 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991302799781 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08104553934 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180471769011 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917568061429 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.6 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.