Many people argue that eating junk food has led to an unhealthy lifestyle. This problem has become more common among young people these days. Do you agree or disagree that junk food is the cause of the issue?
In this era lifestyle changed everything is turning around, even in food where several kinds are severed and affecting people health and cause many problems. There is an argue between several societies, some that junk food is causing health problem on human being, others disagree with this point and believe food cannot lead any problem.
On one hand, a group pf people agree and believe that fast food include preservatives that might ruin our health system. First, most food include chemical products, in order to stay longer in the market and preserving the same taste. Second, many think that the products that are used in such food, will lead to obesity that may cause heart attack to some or chronic diseases such as cancer. For example, my little brother since he was young, he got used to eat a lot of junk food and his weight increased; few years ago he faced difficulty in breathing, after several medical tests it’s shown that a disease covered his stomach causing him such health obstacles.
On the other hand, some people disagree with the idea that junk food led to an unhealthy lifestyle. First, for several believe that food is enjoyable, delicious especially the junk food where cannot be missed. Second, they think that if food is unhealthy why they are producing or advertising it in the market. However, many people say that eating junk food, will help to benefit more hours at work and don’t waste their time on preparing their own food. For example, in many busy cities working people prefer to buy ready food from the store when they are back home, in order to gain time to continue their work or spend it with their families.
As a conclusion, there is two type of people, some agree that junk food drive to an unhealthy life, others disagree and think that it helps them to gain more time during their day. From my point of view, I agree that people should know what to eat and take time to prepare a nutritious food, to avoid any problem to stay energetic.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ealth and cause many problems. There is an argue between several societies, some that ju...
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Line 2, column 450, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to eating'.
Suggestion: used to eating
...ttle brother since he was young, he got used to eat a lot of junk food and his weight incre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, so, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71142857143 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22146302224 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534285714286 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.1942131164 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.846153846 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9230769231 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417471620054 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158540409745 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080274007459 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26520572212 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570286599868 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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