Nowadays young people are admiring media and Sports Star, even though they do not set a good example. Do you think it is a positive or negative development
Indubitably, it is a recreational era of entertainment and sports industry. Apparently, it is often argued that the youth of the contemporary era are admiring media and sports stars regardless of any exemplary influence. However such kind of admiration is a mixed bag of both boon and bane.
Apparently following film figures and sport persons has many constructive benefits and which can be substantiated by many supportive arguments. Initially, it assists and individual a lot in learning and taking great variety of knowledge in that specific field thus boosting myriad number of skills. To vindicate, calling Cristiano Ronaldo will undoubtedly help with follower to nourish him with the knowledge of football. Not only this will result in his Holistic development but also will make him to leave footprints of epitome excellence.
Although it has positive outcomes, yet it is accompanied by various setbacks. It is a well stated fact that a leader must influence his followers in a positive way.In the contemporary era, following the sedentary lifestyles of on screen stars has resulted into drastic and detrimental effects. For instance, a Virat Kohli follower will forcefully demand same extravagant living he prefers such as costly diet, branded clothes and a millionaire girlfriend. Additionally, it has made us extremely ignorant about the true maintenance of the society who really deserve our attention. Consequently, the present youth are not focusing on excelling heroes of peace sign and social causes.
Thus to wrap up the discussion, despite pros and cons the person we look upon is more over a subjective property and everyone has different choices and preferences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, however, if, look, really, so, thus, well, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38490566038 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10291035768 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679245283019 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1199385276 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.769230769 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0817655738292 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273288927462 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035247034536 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0465708417051 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465633158383 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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