write a letter to your recent employer to ask for a reference letter you need to apply for job in a international company Tell him what you did for the company your work describe him your new job ask him for reference letter

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write a letter to your recent employer to ask for a reference letter you need to apply for job in a international company
Tell him what you did for the company/your work
describe him your new job
ask him for reference letter

My name is Harsimran Kaur and I am currently working as an accountant in your company. I am writing this letter to seek assistance regarding the reference letter which I need as I have applied for job in an international company. I believe that you are the best person to describe my personality.

Apparently, in these two years I have worked with sheer determination and efficiency. I have equipped myself with valuable experience under your guidance. I have considerably benefited the organisation in exponential rise of profits. Tacitly, I have applied for the same designation in the another company. As my job duties will be the same however I may require some technological upgradations to retain my employment.

I would request you to write a reference letter for me so that I can present it to my potential employer. Ostensibly reference letter is the reflection of the personality of an employee. In my profound opinion I have shared good bond with your with your renowned company and you as well. I have to submit my application till the end of this month subsequently I am in the need of your reference letter so that I can attach it with my application form and submit it successfully.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully

Harsimran Kaur

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rise of profits. Tacitly, I have applied for the same designation in the another ...
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Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'with your'.
Suggestion: with your
...rofound opinion I have shared good bond with your with your renowned company and you as well. I hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, however, look, may, regarding, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.85567010309 363% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94470046083 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14568031368 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534562211982 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4373330426 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6428571429 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308916642203 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104598556635 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826584052906 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174731457333 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105810948515 0.0580467560999 182% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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