Damage to the environment is an inevitable consequence of worldwide improvements in the standard of living

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Damage to the environment is an inevitable consequence of worldwide improvements in the standard of living.

Over last few years there has been a massive issue on the environment similar to the continuous development process of the world. Most of the people believe that environment is been threaten by the development progresses such as oil factories, gas factories and etc. in this essay I’m going to give some supportive comments on this topic.

For instance, there has been a substantial change in weather condition all over the world. To make a standard people do some serious damages on the environment such as cutting trees, killing animals, fire the woods, etc. and sometime people change the envi...

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environment is been threaten by the development
environment has been threatened by the development

These consequences of pollution of the environment and the continuous changes in weather.
Description: what is the verb for this sentence? can you re-write this sentence?

has been severely damage
has been severely damaged

ice burgs in Arctic and Antarctic has started to melt
ice burgs in Arctic and Antarctic have started to melt

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